Mark Adler: publications
Last updated: 17 June 2009

Book Publication and other details
[Clarity for Lawyers, 2nd edn] The Law Society, London, 2006
xxii and 200 pages; paperback
234 mm x 156 mm
£29.95
ISBN 1 85328 985 X


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Publishers' summary

The traditional style of legal drafting has been widely discredited over the last 40 years, and clear, modern English is now increasingly required by law and by clients. But few lawyers are able to produce it. Mark Adler debunks the myth that legalese is precise and explains, with many before-and-after examples, how lawyers can increase their efficiency, profits, and client approval while making their documents more reliable. This second edition is 'a treasure house' (according to Lord Bingham's foreword) and 'entertaining. More than once I was caught laughing out loud while reading it' (according to one reviewer). It has been thoroughly revised, updated and expanded to include new sections on ambiguity, vagueness, miscuing, and editing, as well as advice about communication via emails and websites, persuasive writing, and the rules of interpretation. The book also contains a helpful range of precedents written in plain English, including a simple will, memorandum of association, and divorce petition. Adler's entertaining style informed by his extensive experience in practice and teaching makes this a reader-friendly, practical, and insightful book.
Extract from the typescript: The purpose of this book Typescript contents page Foreword to the 2nd edition (by Lord Bingham of Cornhill)
What the critics said about the 1st edition What the critics have said about the 2nd edition

I am still waiting (patiently!) for feedback, as suggested in the book, to stimulate a discussion page here.


Conference presentation

Legalese and plain language: how we might revise s.4(1) of the Appropriation Act 2008 Commonwealth Association of Legislative Counsel, Hong Kong, April 2009 Added 17.6.09

Selected articles

In support of plain law: an answer to Francis Bennion The Loophole, August 2008 Added 29.8.08
Clear legal writing (for judges) Journal of the District Judges' Association c. 2000
Eggbound Clarity 41, April 1998
Better drafting (a statement of claim) Clarity 41, April 1998
Solicitors' negligence: who pays? Solicitors Journal, 30 January 1998
Better drafting (a court order) Clarity 40, August 1997
Better drafting (a will extract) Clarity 36, August 1996
Drafting snippets Clarity 34, January 1996
Tried and tested: the myth behind the cliché Clarity 34, January 1996
Alphabet soup The Law Society's Gazette, November 1993
British lawyers' attitudes to plain English Clarity 28, August 1993
Bamboozling the public New Law Journal, 26 July 1991
Scribes Journal of Legal Writing, Vol 9 (2003-04)

Obtaining by deception
Law Quarterly Review, 1974
Homepage Example of my
plain drafting style
Try your hand at plain drafting Biography